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Need Feedback
#1
Hey, last weekend I finally decided to get around my self and install FL Studio. I've been using the trial version and creating loops one hour at a time, because my friends are too nice I was looking to get some honest feedback from the perspective of someone with a musical background.

My favourite out of the four listed on my YouTube account is named "Rail"

ThankyouSmile

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCGCtX1G...RUK0z7WITA
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#2
I don't really know what you are trying to achieve or where the music is going but there is a problem with timing on three of the four tracks I heard. You need to focus on that. Listen carefully.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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#3
put down the FL Studio and pick up a guitar

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#4
Jerome Wrote:I don't really know what you are trying to achieve or where the music is going but there is a problem with timing on three of the four tracks I heard. You need to focus on that. Listen carefully.

Agreed. I thought ReLux as a tune showed some kind of life but really it sounded like something an eight-year-old could conjure up before dinner.
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#5
I added some more, wondering if I could get feedback on these two?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kRY2uMnNs3E
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3RYV7RkRnkg
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#6
It is difficult to assess the short pieces as a whole song. Although second track Anticipatience at 0:45 feels like needed another bit, not a repeat of start of the track.
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#7
The pieces are far from complete. Finish the job and then ask people to assess the results.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
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