The production is OK but it sounds incomplete to me. it does not go anywhere??!??
It was for a criteria of 90 seconds so I was limited to that time scale, but do you mean musically? And the production is something I'm still working out!
No the production is fine - don't have a problem with that - quality is good, but I just felt it wasn't really going anywhere. Would like to hear something you have composed as a 'stand alone' piece. Something thematic with a start and finish and an interesting journey in-between. The idea is there - would just like to see it turned into something that lasts about 5 minutes or so. And don't let my comments do your head in - it's just a singular opinion - just as relevant and as irrelevant as everyone else's. At the end of the day it does not matter what I think but what you believe in. If you have a vision for your music - go with it. They've never built a statue to honour a critic.....
Compose a piece that makes people see a movie without the visuals.
![[Image: roger-ebert-statue.jpg]](http://assets.nydailynews.com/polopoly_fs/1.1451086.1378838175!/img/httpImage/image.jpg_gen/derivatives/landscape_635/roger-ebert-statue.jpg)
A scale model of a sculpture of late film critic Roger Ebert sits on a table at a news conference outside the Virginia Theatre in Champaign, Ill.
Looks like him. I used to watch Siskel & Ebert all the time.
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A scale model of a sculpture of late film critic Roger Ebert sits on a table at a news conference outside the Virginia Theatre in Champaign, Ill.
Neither a critic nor a statue. This is the well documented case of a guy who was hitch hiking and unfortunately was never offered a lift in 20 years. I am going to have to seriously consider a diet with the amount of humble pie I am being forced to eat!