Gh - screw up

[dribblet]

This is my first music video

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jn1ZguIgsVA

Your opinions are important to me

Thanks

[Jerome]

Sorry, does not do anything for me. No real music to speak of - just the same motif over and over ad nauseam. Sounds like a million other tracks out there. Can't make out half the lyrics as well.

[dribblet]

Thanks for constructive critics

[Jerome]

No problem.