Budding writers and NEWBIes

[suhasr2]

Hi guyz
i am a musician,writer,singer,production artist and blah blah
the thing is, I do all my songs on my own without anyone;s help
so i would like you guys to have a look at my album
CAN YOU COMMENT ON THEM????
http://www.last.fm/music/Visard/RedeFinEd%252B
and alsomile:
dis one is a video
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qgzymv1AD0
hope you guyz like it and me too
THANX
CAN YOU COMMENT ON THEM????