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Planktons Odyssey
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12-05-2016, 17:18
I figured I'd get this out of the way. I play guitar. Here's a tune I did for my daughter:

[video=youtube;I6pKQzUxldw]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I6pKQzUxldw[/video]
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12-05-2016, 19:17
I kind of like it. Mixing can be improved upon but the foundation is there. The lead line in the opening phrase is a bit indistinct, but when the power lead comes in it has a great tone and a good feel. You could expand on this with drums etc. and really turn it into something. Good work.
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12-05-2016, 19:29
Jerome Wrote:I kind of like it. Mixing can be improved upon but the foundation is there. The lead line in the opening phrase is a bit indistinct, but when the power lead comes in it has a great tone and a good feel. You could expand on this with drums etc. and really turn it into something. Good work.

Thanks Jerome. Mixing isn't my strong point. In fact, I wish I had someone to do it for me.
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13-05-2016, 15:03
This one has better production. I made it while waiting on the girl friend to make some meat loaf one day.

[video=youtube;lP-ILjwloRM]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lP-ILjwloRM[/video]
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