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Hey Guys,
I wanted to get an idea of what you guys think of my song, and critique it. I don't mind harsh criticism at all so go at it
I just wanna be sure i'm headed in the right direction and get an idea of what people think of this type of sound since its a little different then what I usually do! Lemme know what you think!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YEQxH_BGVz0
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Not my kind of music, but it has loads of potential for the right market - it sort of reminds me of Michael Jackson?!!?? It's well recorded and the piano piece is well structured. A job well done.
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the paino playing is very good IMO from a listener's point of view.
i like the lyrics and melody also...
only thing that bothers me are the vocals,they are quite tuneful but theres something that bothers me about them that i cannot put my finger on!
all up though...yeh,its good
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The video is way too weak - just two lovebirds staring at each other. A bit too teeniebopperish for me.
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Good overall performance, I liked it !
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Jerome Wrote:Not my kind of music, but it has loads of potential for the right market - it sort of reminds me of Michael Jackson?!!?? It's well recorded and the piano piece is well structured. A job well done.
Thanks a lot!
I'm actually posting another song that i've remixed from another genre! Let me know if thats a little bit more of your music and you can give me your opinion
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CRAZY-HORSE Wrote:the paino playing is very good IMO from a listener's point of view.
i like the lyrics and melody also...
only thing that bothers me are the vocals,they are quite tuneful but theres something that bothers me about them that i cannot put my finger on!
all up though...yeh,its good
Yea a couple of people had different opinions which i am quite surprised. Most people had said the lyrics sucked which I agreed to and they said the voice carried the song! But i do agree at some points i did go off key which i noticed later on!
