Can anyone improve on this?

[ambernector]

Thanks for that. Personally I like your point 3 version more, as it is clear and politically correct (important in this Day and age). Assume the below is now the current. Please also point out any grammer and spelling mistakes, I promise you won't offend anyone.

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