10-08-2009, 11:16
I think "straightforward" is one word, and "back-to-basics" and "advertisement-free" may be hyphenated.
Also, I think "In addition, an area for links and social groups are available to share musical sites and experiences." needs to be something like...
"In addition, an area for links and social groups is available to share musical sites and experiences."
or
"In addition, areas for links and social groups are available to share musical sites and experiences."
...depending on whether they are separate areas or not.
And to be honest, I may be a little oversensitive, having once been "vetted" while on a backwoods canoe trip by a gang of rednecks.
Good luck with the new spiel.
Also, I think "In addition, an area for links and social groups are available to share musical sites and experiences." needs to be something like...
"In addition, an area for links and social groups is available to share musical sites and experiences."
or
"In addition, areas for links and social groups are available to share musical sites and experiences."
...depending on whether they are separate areas or not.
And to be honest, I may be a little oversensitive, having once been "vetted" while on a backwoods canoe trip by a gang of rednecks.
Good luck with the new spiel.