05-07-2013, 20:20
The material is fine but the vocals need some work -both in execution and especially in the mix (listen on headphones and you will see what I mean.) Also experiment with stereo widening on some of the instruments, especially lead guitar - that will open it up. Reminds me a bit of the Stones??!!??
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