New song feedback please. . . .
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New song feedback please. . . .
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11-06-2012, 16:23
Your song seems full of realism--not the most encouraging, but realism is what you were aiming for then you hit the nail on the head. I'd just change the part in the chorus from "It may not go to plan" to "Things may not go as planned," just to make it a little easier to understand. Otherwise, though, good work!!
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New song feedback please. . . . - by kashykeegan - 10-05-2011, 16:31
New song feedback please. . . . - by Jerome - 10-05-2011, 21:56
New song feedback please. . . . - by freakingidol - 25-10-2011, 06:14
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