08-12-2008, 14:56
Hmm...thats really good. 
For the music part, acoustic BUT, if you can do this, with a little screaming, the soft kind.
Or do that thing thats like half screaming half singing. If you dont know what I mean check out The Day I Left The Womb by Escape The Fate, the second verse and pretty much on from there.
Or keep it light and add heavy guitar riffs between verses. Maybe start out heavier and get softer as the riff goes on.
Just a thought.
Or it still would be really pretty just soft a light.
For the music part, acoustic BUT, if you can do this, with a little screaming, the soft kind.
Or do that thing thats like half screaming half singing. If you dont know what I mean check out The Day I Left The Womb by Escape The Fate, the second verse and pretty much on from there.
Or keep it light and add heavy guitar riffs between verses. Maybe start out heavier and get softer as the riff goes on.
Just a thought.
Or it still would be really pretty just soft a light.
ill carry you down
i wont make a sound
-air traffic, owl city
Iloveyewjayjayy
r.i.p, love
i wont make a sound
-air traffic, owl city
Iloveyewjayjayy
r.i.p, love