01-03-2017, 09:03
Yes you are right, the video is cheesy. Very, in fact. The song itself needs a bridge section to break up the monotony - too much of the same throughout. Lyrics are not that great - not much imagination to them. You do, however, have a good voice. Just my opinion. Others might see it differently.
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.