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chains of life
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the dark sides of my mind as i look into the sky

thoughts of her are bitter as she begins to cry

she doesent know I'm angry Screaming bout her lies

but today will be the end and i hope nobody dies


Screaming at the top of my LUNGS
I feel the blood coursing thru my veins.

holding onto my life while my feet are
shakeled to these chains


Here is where Life takes its toll

tearing and Eating my Eternal Soul

should i help or just sit by

as i watch you ******* die


Im just gonna watch.





Thats just some of what i just wrote down in the last 10 min.
It's one of my first attempts at writting a song and i decided to incorporate a couple different singing styles for more of an idea on how i heard the song in my head

starts out with just vocal rap. once it gets to the 5th line its starts some screamo. 9th line is still screamo but screamo rap. and the last line is done in like a death metal vocal growl.

It's short but i liked the way it sounded in my head so im gonna keep working on it.
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Messages In This Thread
chains of life - by Nicotine - 06-05-2008, 19:06
chains of life - by Tiggi - 07-05-2008, 18:27
chains of life - by Nicotine - 07-05-2008, 23:00
chains of life - by Palmer - 30-08-2008, 04:02

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