Origine - Redemption

[Jerome]

Hard to explain what I mean, but it just kind of 'plods' along - sort of 'plink, plonk, plink, plonk' type of thing. I listened to your other tracks and there are better ones than this track. Also at times I find it difficult to make out what you are saying/singing. Don't get me wrong, you guys are talented, and I can see you've put in the effort but it just lacks something. Send me a mail to jerome@auralscapes.com - I might have something for you to try out. Regardless, don't give up - keep on playing!