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[Ron Tibbetts]

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[Jerome]

Ron, there are some interesting chord progressions in your music but you need to put some melodic instrument/part on top of it. Just strumming chords alone is not going to cut it. It needs direction. Also, one thing that is noticeable in many of your pieces is the fact that you are not pressing down the strings fully and this is resulting in 'bum' notes and buzzing. You need to apply more force on the fretboard. If you had someone playing a melody line along with your harmony part it would sound far more effective. Get a mate to accompany you.