Unadornedness, Original Composition for Strings

[Schuldiner0707]

Here is a composition for strings I just published. I hope you enjoy it

Link to the music: https://youtu.be/ZNhq4NudwUw

[CRAZY-HORSE]

to me (and im not musician) this is lacking a lot for my ears.
probably sounds okay for incidental music in a movie score but to sit there and listen to it its just very little of anything.
it just sounds like the base of something that needs a middle and top layer added to it
like i said, im no expert and certainly couldnt compose anything its just not what i would listen to or purchase.

lets hope Jerome comes in and offers you some constructive ideas and thoughts for you.