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Hello everyone.
This is my new composition. What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/valeriorisiglione/discovery
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Dear ValexRs
Very pretty. I liked the clear structure and the rhythmic patterns of triplets in the left hand, syncopated of course in the faster sections. Well done. Now how about making this a "scherzo" movement in a longer, sonata-style, piece?
L.
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The file is in mono - if you release a true stereo version and add a stereo widener it will sound a lot better. Listen on headphones - the whole piece is trapped in the centre of the audio spectrum - because it is a solo piece you can use reverb and stereo widening to open it up without affecting other instruments. Try it - you will be surprised. Or send me your wave file and I will show you what I mean.
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