My song, I'd like to hear your opinion :)

[Roval]

Ok then, here's the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kBFfnMgSQuk

I tried to keep this song in some sort of dark, heavy climate.

I play guitar for about 4 years now - year ago I started to create my own music and I'm not good songwriter unfortunately, at least that's my opinion
Sooo, I really, really, Really! want to hear what you think about that little song of mine

[avakas]

It is good actually. Really!
That is one thing I don't get with especially the music industry.
Good stuff remains so well hidden that no one will ever hear it. I hear no difference between this and any other dark song out there.

Maybe I am just not the right person to critique.

[charles1641]

Nothing succeeded like success..
Its really good Dude...

[suhasr2]

see dude yours is better than mine
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9qgzymv1AD0
but this is a hard industry
i think tere will be a chance for everyone to get into the spotlight
im trying too
this is my album[URL="http://www.last.fm/music/Visard/RedeFinEd%252B"]
http://www.last.fm/music/Visard/RedeFinEd%252B[/URL]
what about this???

[Cali5]

Good one, especially the piano, nice workmile: