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Jamsah - Fire Away - asluk1011 - 04-07-2011 I wrote this song for a project, what do ya'll think of it? [URL="http://www.facebook.com/jamsah?sk=app_178091127385"] [/URL][url=http://itunes.apple.com/us/album/fire-away-single/id438728654][/url] Jamsah - Fire Away - Jerome - 05-07-2011 Not bad - quite catchy but neeeds a bit of polish on the production side. Vocals need to be more prominent in the mix. Bass needs to be centrered in the mix - it's slightly off to one side and very noticeable on headphones. Like the bass parts in the chorus. Change the reverb on the drumkit - less is more! The guitar could do with some chorus effect. Try this on the guitar - make 2 copies of the guitar track. In your mixer pan one copy hard left. Pan the other copy hard right but with a short delay of about 35 to 50 ms. Jamsah - Fire Away - Music Head - 05-07-2011 Jerome Wrote:Not bad - quite catchy but neeeds a bit of polish on the production side. Vocals need to be more prominent in the mix. Bass needs to be centrered in the mix - it's slightly off to one side and very noticeable on headphones. Like the bass parts in the chorus. Change the reverb on the drumkit - less is more! The guitar could do with some chorus effect. Try this on the guitar - make 2 copies of the guitar track. In your mixer pan one copy hard left. Pan the other copy hard right but with a short delay of about 35 to 50 ms. how'd you do that? Jamsah - Fire Away - Jerome - 05-07-2011 In the digital domain - or any DAW (Digital audio workstation - essentially a PC dedicated to making music) it's as easy as copy and paste is in a word processor. The days of the large mixing consoles, impressive as they are, are truly gone. |