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Judge my lyrics, please? - 1blankmind - 15-10-2016
Yellow Is Everywhere
It's here and there
No one seems to care
As it runs the air
Turn on the T.V.
Yellow is all I see
Covers our ears and eyes
Takes over your mind
Yellow is money
Yellow consumes me
Yellow lies
Give it your dime
Judge my lyrics, please? - Jerome - 15-10-2016
Please explain what you mean by each line.
Judge my lyrics, please? - CRAZY-HORSE - 15-10-2016
I think they should take the Nobel Literature Prize off Bob Dylan and give it to 1blankmind....just saying?!?!
Judge my lyrics, please? - CRAZY-HORSE - 15-10-2016
you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.
Judge my lyrics, please? - 1blankmind - 15-10-2016
Jerome Wrote:Please explain what you mean by each line.
Yellow is in reference to yellow journalism. The song is about the media twisting things to fit an ideology Rather than present the facts indiscriminately.
CRAZY-HORSE Wrote:you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.
Lol. I wouldn't know. I don't listen to coldplay.
Judge my lyrics, please? - Jerome - 15-10-2016
OK, makes more sense now.
Next question - where's the music?
Judge my lyrics, please? - 1blankmind - 15-10-2016
Jerome Wrote:OK, makes more sense now.
Next question - where's the music?
Haven't finished the song yet. Not ready for release.
Judge my lyrics, please? - bob_32_116 - 15-10-2016
I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?
Judge my lyrics, please? - 1blankmind - 15-10-2016
bob_32_116 Wrote:I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?
Kind of. Yellow journalism, "journalism that is based upon sensationalism and crude exaggeration."
RE: Judge my lyrics, please? - Subtle Q - 05-02-2020
Honestly, these days I wouldn't mind some good ol' fashioned yellow journalism. To my eyes, it seems like journalists only see red these days.
Always good to see people writing about mass media mania. Nice work.
