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New song we finished a couple weeks ago... Thoughts? good or bad. - aurora4dth - 26-02-2016

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0zMnh3iy6tk


New song we finished a couple weeks ago... Thoughts? good or bad. - Jerome - 26-02-2016

Good! I like this. There is something (a type of effect - percussive type of thing in the background that's a bit annoying - on headphones anyway) but I like the track. Clean it up and you have something. Not my kind of music but it has potential in the current marketplace. Like the touch on the cymbals somewhere in the middle - nice.


New song we finished a couple weeks ago... Thoughts? good or bad. - aurora4dth - 27-02-2016

Thanx for the input. I know the percussive thing you are talking about. It is part of a loop i created. i tried to keep the rhythm track more than just basic drums. so i added the loops as well.
Thanx again


New song we finished a couple weeks ago... Thoughts? good or bad. - Jerome - 27-02-2016

This is your work and at the end of the day you must decide what you want to do with it. You might be amazed at what a simple live percussive instrument can do for a track - like a tambourine, woodblock or a cowbell etc. Your song has potential and I think if you can do something about that percussive loop you have a winner. Good luck in your quest.