chains of life
the dark sides of my mind as i look into the sky
thoughts of her are bitter as she begins to cry
she doesent know I'm angry Screaming bout her lies
but today will be the end and i hope nobody dies
Screaming at the top of my LUNGS
I feel the blood coursing thru my veins.
holding onto my life while my feet are
shakeled to these chains
Here is where Life takes its toll
tearing and Eating my Eternal Soul
should i help or just sit by
as i watch you ******* die
Im just gonna watch.
Thats just some of what i just wrote down in the last 10 min.
It's one of my first attempts at writting a song and i decided to incorporate a couple different singing styles for more of an idea on how i heard the song in my head
starts out with just vocal rap. once it gets to the 5th line its starts some screamo. 9th line is still screamo but screamo rap. and the last line is done in like a death metal vocal growl.
It's short but i liked the way it sounded in my head so im gonna keep working on it.
Last edited by Nicotine; 06-05-2008 at 18:13.
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Good effort !!
I've never written a song, so I hereby challenge myself to write a hit. I'll think on this, then stun you all .
its really hard for me to write songs cause i constantly write in rhyme's for some reason evertime i try to write one.