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    Default Judge my lyrics, please?

    Yellow Is Everywhere
    It's here and there
    No one seems to care
    As it runs the air

    Turn on the T.V.
    Yellow is all I see
    Covers our ears and eyes
    Takes over your mind

    Yellow is money
    Yellow consumes me
    Yellow lies
    Give it your dime

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    Please explain what you mean by each line.
    'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.

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    I think they should take the Nobel Literature Prize off Bob Dylan and give it to 1blankmind....just saying?!?!

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    you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerome View Post
    Please explain what you mean by each line.
    Yellow is in reference to yellow journalism. The song is about the media twisting things to fit an ideology Rather than present the facts indiscriminately.

    Quote Originally Posted by CRAZY-HORSE View Post
    you should use a different colour to write about, Coldplay already covered that colour satisfactory IMO.
    Lol. I wouldn't know. I don't listen to coldplay.

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    OK, makes more sense now.
    Next question - where's the music?
    'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerome View Post
    OK, makes more sense now.
    Next question - where's the music?
    Haven't finished the song yet. Not ready for release.

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    I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?

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    Quote Originally Posted by bob_32_116 View Post
    I never heard of "yellow journalism". Is that something like purple prose?
    Kind of. Yellow journalism, "journalism that is based upon sensationalism and crude exaggeration."


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