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    I like her voice but I don't like the song

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    Thank you for your opinion

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    what about this version?

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    a restless spirit Jerome's Avatar
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    From Cape Town, South Africa


    I agree with CH. She has a good voice but there are too many mismatched samples in the instrumentation. The piece needs real instruments and a complete rethink when it comes to programming the drums and percussion. Especially in the chorus where the 'snare' is falling on the first beat instead of the second. A more defined bass line would help as well. The main thing that is wrong though is the lack of direction in the track. It's a simple verse/chorus thing. There needs to be a bridge or a deviation off the established pattern - maybe a key change as well. You are in the ballpark - it just needs more work.
    Last edited by Jerome; 11-02-2016 at 06:15.
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