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    Instrumental electronic music.

    https://soundcloud.com/tsydae/atlantis
    Last edited by tsydae; 09-05-2014 at 16:02.

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    a restless spirit Jerome's Avatar
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    Major glitch at 01:35!!!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jerome View Post
    Major glitch at 01:35!!!
    you just had to make me listen
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    it's not a glitch, it's just a line of melody

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    Not the melody - the percussion/drums - a complete mishit. The timing falls apart. Clear as day - plus the synth goes out of whack as well. A very common mistake when copying and pasting sequences. Solo the bass synth and solo the drums/percussion and you will see what I mean. The 'melody' is what the higher pitched synth is playing. In music there are three elements - melody, harmony and rhythm. The bass synth and the drums/percussion are forming the rhythmic structure not the melody.
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    Jerome is spot on
    I heard it too
    Only audible to the trained ear
    There's a few of those here
    but it doesn't matter to the untrained ear
    there are a lot more of those
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    Bass synth playing a melodic line at this piece. Holding a bass line within a rhythmic sequence gives monotony for track in generally.
    But I should rework this piece for common harmonization, I agree.

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    I see you have repaired it. Sounds much better now.
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