I would love if you could say your opinion and critique about my new song! TY!
Hello everybody! i would love to hear your opinion and critque about my song lyrics! . thanks! some ppl can relate to these lyrics!
Song: Second chance
when i was happy,i did not care
for things that everyone Did
there was a girl, and she ment the world to me.
the happy days are over, and no one lives along
the happiness was stolen within the memories
the people i loved,looked so differently
why were they walking so separately
every day and moment, was like the history
all the same problems and even mysteries
i was left alone to live so desperately
and i felt the agony
the happy places now are gone
everything what i have done
reflects like a mirror on my wall
I see every little thing
all the pain i'v been through
now im sitting in this empty hall
waiting days for my last call
you changed my past,i changed the futures paths
but, if we meet again, i know, that i would love you once again
and never let go of you...
Last edited by gugu112; 10-11-2013 at 14:51.
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