Pretty good !
The material is fine but the vocals need some work -both in execution and especially in the mix (listen on headphones and you will see what I mean.) Also experiment with stereo widening on some of the instruments, especially lead guitar - that will open it up. Reminds me a bit of the Stones??!!??
'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.
Oh The Rolling Stones were perfect from the start..Can't Get No Satisfaction sounds as fresh now as it did some 48 years ago !!!! I don't think Mick's vocals needed "work" ..sounded the same from start to now..their own distinctive sound.It's near impossible nowadats to not have comparisons drawn to the Classic Rock Giants! ... ...keep up the good work Stoffe ! Listen to what the J man said ...he knows his stuff !
" WHEN I WAS FIVE YEARS OLD, MY MOTHER ALWAYS TOLD ME THAT HAPPINESS WAS THE KEY TO LIFE. WHEN I WENT TO SCHOOL, THEY ASKED ME WHAT I WANTED TO BE WHEN I GREW UP. I WROTE DOWN "HAPPY". THEY TOLD ME I DIDN'T UNDERSTAND THE ASSIGNMENT AND I TOLD THEM THEY DIDN'T UNDERSTAND LIFE."
- JOHN LENNON