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    Hey everyone!
    It would mean so much if you took a few minutes to look at my music and tell me what you think!
    Thanks so much!
    Last edited by Shrouds; 19-07-2012 at 10:19.

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    a restless spirit Jerome's Avatar
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    From Cape Town, South Africa


    Maybe it is going to work, but it does not work for me. As far as I can tell these are just sentences thrown together, without any real purpose or destination. As long as everything just rhymes that seems to be acceptable today. True songwriting is a craft and not something that sounds like it came out of a rhyming dictionary. If the music had some real instruments that would help as well. Sorry - don't like it.
    'The purpose of life is a life of purpose' - Athena Orchard.

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