Thread: Me, the drinker

I posted this on a couple of other sites, but no responses. I hope people will see the message and the songs attitude.

I have to confess a fragile thing
Such surprise the real truth can bring
I sought the fridge and the only thing appropriate
That Soya milk wasn’t too good by itself
And inviting larger cans lay on the shelf
I’d rather keep the edge
Say no to those addictions
Me, the drinker
Me, the rational thinker
That’s me, most of you didn’t pass my mouth
Just not tasty, now your in the sewage
So strange But I decided to do this
If you were the best larger
Then I hate to think what was the worst
Maybe in a few years I’ll have it add water
But of its kind was the last and first
Me, the drinker
Me, the rational thinker
That’s me, most of you didn’t pass my mouth
Just not tasty, now your in the sewage
So strange But I decided to do this
Maybe one day alcohol will fade and die
When the media no longer encourages it
And I won’t have to worry about falling in
And I know that Jesus drunk the wine!
But that was such a different time!
Woah oh oh
Me, the drinker
Me, the rational thinker
That’s me, most of you didn’t pass my mouth
Just not tasty, now your in the sewage
So strange But I decided to do this
Goodbye alcohol until I’m nineteen
Then maybe I’ll have a private drink

well well what a subject matthew but i like this set of lyrics its very difficult to judge it alone on just lyrics do you have some music for this ?

some great lines in this such as

I have to confess a fragile thing
Such surprise the real truth can bring

I’d rather keep the edge
Say no to those addictions
Me, the drinker
Me, the rational thinker

I didn't intend to post it all in one, but it came out like that. Format like a hardcore song, but its hardly for that genre. I havent recorded, or even sung the song but its something I just wanted to get across to people. anti alcohol, about falling in, finding a compromise and saying "yea I sorta drank, but didnt go through with it, but im not glad i let alcohol into my system"

I still think it is a remarkable set of lyrics and speaks volumes well done

I really like them! Good stuff. Some good bits of alliteration and rhyming too :-)

Is this a song you wrote? cus its really good.!

Good lyrics. Could be used for a good rock song.

I like it, its cool and pretty good. If someone were to play that i wud defently listen to it :)

I think you should promote your lyrics and songs with social media, like twitter, it would be better if you have your own site or blog and update regularly with your new works.